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DAZ Studio 4.9 with iRay, Copyright (C) 2016 Heinz Hemken, submitted 3 Oct 2016
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Elwood-Edward-Howes Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2016

Unauthorized Communication by hhemken

This is a fun DAZ Studio illustration.  The red shape on the right side is too heavy and needs cropping.  Ayumi seems wooden: lifeless right arm (reader's left), blank face and no tilt to the head.  Suggestion: right hand touching the chin, slight tilt to the head and a puzzled look on her face.

 

Love the hair.

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skin2279 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would just fix the arm.
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hhemken Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2016
Thanks! Posing is kind of hard, as you can see.
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Blades-123 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice work, excellent lighting.:)
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hhemken Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2016
Thanks!
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